Wednesday, September 8, 2021

Writing|9/8/21|Week 8|Term 3

 This my writing(also plan) for this week.I really wanted to do a underwater hero but didn't know any so I just searched up on google and I found a superhero named Mera.I also added a creature named Gulpa(I made it up ).I hope you enjoy reading my story.Bye

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  1. Whaea TamzinSeptember 10, 2021 at 11:54 AM

    Nice work Sneha. I really like your piece of writing and I think it's great you did some research to find an underwater hero. I also like how you included your plan so I can see how you prepared for your writing.

    Remember that after a full stop you need to have a space before beginning to write again.

    I also like how you made your story have a cliff hanger

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2021 at 4:38 PM

      Thank you.I always like doing my plan.You get to research about a lot of things

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