This is my writing for this week.And again lock down has come.
My learning was about Should New Zealand open its borders?
Here is a fact.The prime minister is not going to open New Zealand's borders until the end of the year.
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Facts and opinions Should New Zealand open its borders?
No because Firstly if NZ opened its borders more people would come to NZ and if they have COVID 19 or delta it would have spread quickly and more people would get infected and sick.
Secondly NZ right now has 3,519 cases and we do not want more corona in this land or everyone would get sick.
Thirdly the prime minister has told everyone strictly that NZs borders will not open until the end of the year.So people can not travel anywhere else but only NZ.
Lastly, to unite against COVID 19 is to stay at home at level 4.Get vaccinated as soon as possible.Finally always wear a mask when going outside.
Nice work Sneha. I like how you mentioned it was important we unite against COVID.
ReplyDeleteRemember you should include an opening statement that introduces the topic so the reader knows what your writing is about. For example, "COVID-19 is a dangerous virus which has spread around the world, and New Zealand is currently dealing with the DELTA strand outbreak. I disagree that New Zealand should open its borders and here are some reasons why".
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