Is kapa haka good for us?
N.L to persuade
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In my opinion I think kapa haka is good for us because…
Kapa Haka is a traditional MΔORI people performing arts.It is highly visual dance and is part of the New Zealand culture.
The first hakas were created and performed by different Maori tribes as a war dance.The haka was created for 2 reasons.Firstly it was to scare the enemies by bulging their eyes and sticking out their tongues in an aggressive way.
Secondly it was a morel.The believed that when they did the haka they were calling the god of war to help them win the battle.
You can learn a lot of things like new moves, dances and songs.Sometimes Kapa Haka is scary for other people because they don’t know the traditional of the haka.You might like doing kapa haka once you get used to it.
Kia ora Sneha.
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your writing this week. I especially like that you have included the links for the sources where you found your research. I can tell you worked hard on this piece of writing, well done!
Next time remember to add a conclusion at the end of your writing such as "As you can see there are a lot of reasons why kapa haka is good for you, and I believe that kapa haka is good for me". Also remember to double check you spelling and grammar, I noticed a couple of spelling mistakes.
Keep up the great work Sneha!