Friday, October 1, 2021

My writing how does the heart work

How does the Heart work?



Have you always wondered how does the heart keeping on beating to pump the blood into our body.


Parts of the heart 

There are 4 parts of the heart

1. the right atirum 

2. the left atirum

3.right ventricals  

4.left ventricals

How it works?

It all starts up in the right atirum where the where the deoxygentated bloodenter all the way down to the right ventricals and goes up a pipe thing that leads us to the lugs.The deoxygented blood mixes with the blood in the lugs and now are oxynated blood and exit back through the pipes to the heart.Where the reach at the left atirum and go to the left vertical.Then they exit through another pipe that leads us to the rest of the body.Oh,what an adventure.

I hope you have learnt something.If you did comment below.

Here are one of the videos that caught my attention. Link

2 comments:

  1. Hi Sneha.
    I like how you started off your piece of writing with the different parts of the heart. You also did a great job using different types of text features such as subheadings and bullet points.

    I think next time you could break down the information about the heart even more. For example one paragraph explaining each section of the heart and what its role is.

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    1. Okay thanks. Next time I wlll rember to do it.

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